Wednesday, April 29, 2009

Rvised Diagnostic essay

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1964, Will Moore High School made headlines in the New Hampshire Gazette, "Freak killer on the spree". It was said he killed everyone in this high school on Valentine's Day.

2009, a group of college students went to camp in Will Moore High School on Valentine's Day. They thought it would be cool to have the whole school to their self. There was four boys named Jason, Rob, Chris, and Fred. Three girls Mia, Kim, and Kelly. Jason and Kim where a couple, Rob and Mia and Kelly and Chris; Although Fred didn't have a girl friend he was a friend of the group. Fred was always kind of quite but a time cracked funny jokes. Jason and Rob was brothers who were jocks, they played football and their girls where cheerleaders. Chris and Kelly where your average couple who never showed off and who was always scared to take risks, so you can imagine how scared they were in the school. Jason convicted everyone to come instead of doing the same oh get a hotel of go the movies. As they all unpacked their bags and started a camp fire. They all were drinking and telling funny stories. Until Jason decide to telling the story of Michael Kieler.

Jason:
The legend of Michael Kieler started in these halls. It was said a boy named Michael Kieler was a born killer others say he started his killing spree because students pick on him. He looked like a normal high school student with jet black hair that covered his face. They say if he move his hair form his eye you could see red flames.
Chris: (softly)
flaming eyes as him swallow.
Jason:
If you looked at him you'd get scared because of that cold, "I'll kill" look in his eyes.
Rob:
Okay, Jason that's enough stories.
Chris: (shouted)
Where's Fred?
Jason:
Hey, Fred where are you man
Rob:
Yeah, stop paying around
Kelly:
Oh my gosh, so you think you know
Kim:
Kieler?
Kelly:
Yeah.
Jason:
No, his not real it's a myth, I told you guys.
Mia:
So where is Fred

Rob:
I don't know
Jason:
He probably went to take a leak.
Rob:
Yeah, yeah, I bet your right Jason.
Kelly:
You guy it's been 20 minutes and Fred isn't back yet. I getting scared.
Kim:
Kelly's right guy's. I'm scared too.
Mia:
Me too, what should we do?
Jason:
I'm going to look for him, everyone stay here
Rob:
Wait bro I coming with you.
Kim:
What if something happen.
Mia:
Should we stick together.
Chris:
Yeah guys Mia right I think we should stay together, After all the girls needs us.
Jason:
look here's the plan Chris and the girls stay here, Rob and I will check the bathrooms. If we are not back in 10 minutes, then come look for us.
Kim:
Please don't go Jason.
Mia :
I'ma be so worried about you Rob, stay with me.
Rob and Jason Checked the bathroom
Rob:
Hey Fred you in here!
Jason:
You see that?
Rob:
What?
Jason opened the stale door
Rob:
S****, that's Fred, he's dead.
Jason:
Look some basted wrote Happy Valentine's Day on the wall with his blood.
Rob:
Dude, his heart
Jason:
huh
Rob:
The freak cut out Fred's heart and nailed to the wall with a knife
Rob:
Let's get out of here, I'm getting the creeps.
Jason:
Let's go tell the others
Rob:
yeah!
Jason:
Hey come on what are you doing.
Rob:
Getting this knife you never know.
Jason and Rob went back to the hall where everyone else was
Jason:
There not here!
Rob:
Jason this is all your fault, everyone is probably dead and we're next.
Jason:
They probably seen Kieler.
Rob: You said he wasn't real
Jason:
He's not but...
Rob:
But what?
Jason:
Nothing, let's go, we need to find the others and warn them.

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